Hi Mr Agarwal,
Your harassment policy article has been published.
A lot has been changed again, and it took me at least half an hour on this article again. Kindly see what has been changed and why.
Tag words were missing in the Create Content page. The photo was missing too. Serial comma is still missing in series of items.
The other article on preventing sexual harassment is still pending for the following reasons.
You need to create content again; this time through “Feature Article” and not “News”, which you seem to have done.
These two sub-heads need more work again: <strong>4.Workplace Supervision</strong> and <strong>3.Channels for Filing Complaints</strong> Just see if you can add some more information or quotes or expert views in these sub-heads.
You’d need to work on the blurb as well.
Don’t lull yourself that sexual harassment doesn’t happen at your place. Be prepared with a policy…
“Don’t lull yourself into believing that…” will be more like it. Plus, kindly don’t mention policy, as the article, unlike the one before, is not about framing a policy but about taking measures for ‘preventing’ sexual harassment.
Also, kindly writer better image captions for your articles. I know you can write way better captions than this: Sexual harassment happens all the time.
The article needs a photo and tag words.
It needs a box too; the links you gave have already been used in the previous article. We can still provide the links again in the box as they will be useful to the readers, but kindly see if you can put in the efforts required to ideate on and write another box.
There were formatting issues too in this article.
Harpreet Bhagrath