by Harpreet Bhagrath | Dec 4, 2011 | Tutorials for Our Writers
Before you sit down to write features for Cosmos Media, we want you to go through 2000-8000 words (depending on the type and length of feature) worth of research. This is our way of making sure that you have done thorough study of the topic.
Unless you go through this much research, you cannot possibly understand enough about your chosen subject. And while you’re at it, just streamline your research to look for just what you’re looking for. No useless crap and research that takes you away from the issue/topic at hand. For example, if you are doing a feature on the truth behind out-of-body experiences, look specifically for information that advances your understanding of the reality behind this phenomenon. You do research on the popular myths or urban legends about out-of-body experiences, logic behind this phenomenon, what do the doctors, experts, and psychologists say. Waste less time and research work on the general facts about this topic, which can go separately in a box within the article.
Then you put all that you find out in the final 300-800 words feature article, including interesting quotes from experts and people who have experienced out-of-body phenomenon. While writing, keep asking yourself if what you are putting down is clear, informative, and interesting. What finally counts is that our feature has to enlighten people in a clear and interesting manner.
Next, whenever you decide on the feature topic on your own, always let us know the focus of the feature. The ‘peg of the story’ has to be very clear in our minds. For example, if we are covering breast cancer in women, what about this cancer you like to focus on? Since ‘breast cancer’ is a vast subject, we cannot possibly cover the whole topic, unless of course, we’re writing a book on breast cancer.
What exactly about breast cancer should be the focus? Should it be the recent developments in breast cancer or how it affects other family members or something else? The general background information on this topic can always go in a separately written 2-3 paragraphs, as a ‘box’ within the feature. To decide on the ‘peg of the story’ about breast cancer, see what’s been happening in the medical world lately.
Next, we try not to be didactic. So don’t preach, unless you are a very wise, old scientist and everyone knows you to be so; or you are writing a personal column or a blog. Instead of telling people to do something a la a preacher, we say it through facts, expert opinions, researched findings, and results of studies done by professionals and experts. We don’t just say stuff. We prove with all the research we have undertaken for the benefit of the readers. Only a few didactic statements are allowed, but more than a few such lines begin to weigh the feature down.
People will read if Bill Gates is writing about computers or Tiger Woods is writing about golf or Mother Teresa is writing about social work. Unless you are an expert in a field and well known to be so, you are better off sticking to other experts’ researches, works, findings, wordings, quotes, etc., to advance your arguments. So, when you sit down to write a feature, always write with a skeptical scientist as a reader in mind. This type of reader doesn’t buy an argument easily. He has to be convinced about the authenticity of every argument and idea you put across in the feature.
Any questions on these? Give us a tinkle or shoot us a mail.
Harpreet Bhagrath
by Harpreet Bhagrath | Nov 14, 2011 | Tutorials for Our Writers
Here’re the writing guidelines for every writer that starts with Cosmos Media as a feature writer.
First a word on the sub-editing that every writer is expected to do before submitting their pieces. We don’t want to correct mistakes that the writer could’ve corrected herself. Only the errors you cannot find are reasonable, not the ones the writer is capable of correcting.
Second, kindly make sure your thought process is clear on the article you’re covering. After you’ve done your research online and collected enough material to put together a piece, take some time, clear your head, and marshal your thoughts before you start putting it all into words. Don’t begin to write unless you’ve got your head around the researched material. When you’re not organized in your thinking, it shows in the article.
What we want from you is well researched features structured in a planned way and written in coherent language. At no time during the reading of the article should the reader go “Oh, I don’t understand this bit. I don’t know what the writer is trying to say here.” Every sentence and paragraph should follow naturally, and the whole article should have a smooth flow — in language, style, and structure. No hiccups, no confusing bits, no out of place words.
Now when you do get down to writing, have the following in mind. These are the suggestions based on the errors and lapses we repeatedly see in the submitted articles.
When you write, always keep an online dictionary, a thesaurus, and google.com open in your browser.
– Dictionary for obvious reason.
- If you are in doubt about any word or its meaning, don’t be lazy and just use the dictionary.
– Thesaurus to look for that one elusive word.
- Constantly watch out for the best words you can use in your writing. Thesaurus makes looking for elusive words easy.
– Google to clarify doubtful use of certain words. Also to cross-check questionable facts and figures.
- If you are in doubt about a word, phrase or sentence structure, Google it. At Cosmos Media, we’re trying to give a good impression to the readers. Correct English usage and cross-checking facts and figures are the requirements for that.
- If you find the suspicious word or phrase having been used by reliable sources, it’s good enough for us. Otherwise, discard it.
- Any word or phrase used by Associated Press or BBC is good for us.
Paras should be roughly 20-60 words long and 1-3 lines strong. Try to adhere to this limit.
Edit your sentences for punctuation, spelling, style, grammar, and word usage. Also check wordiness. Keep libel issues and principle of fairness in mind while framing sentences.
Be careful in the use of capital letters, apostrophe, and punctuation marks like commas, semicolons, and colons.
– Dr Shinde said, “The study validates the traditional use of herb as a youth-promoting substance in the Ayurvedic system of medicine.”
– When writing feature headings, be careful with caps. Our features headings are written in title case, but this doesn’t mean every single word in capital letters. Majority of the publications, as well as us now, capitalize the principal words only. Leave prepositions (of, with, from, including, behind, against, etc.) in small case. Ditto goes for the.
– To study accurate use of caps, punctuation marks, etc., at length, Google your requirements. It will give you good links to online English language resources.
- Or take our help; we’ll be happy to put you on the right track.
Be generally careful with the use of conjunctions like while and although. The fact that we write research-based analytical articles on our medicine and health portal themedguru.com makes these tools that much more valuable. But using them blindly is not the way. Just leave it out when the argument you are putting forth doesn’t warrant the use of while. (In any case, use although instead of while; keep the latter for giving readers a ‘sense of time’ only, as in “while I did my writing, Samantha cooked cookies for me.”)
– While a third of the miscarriages are usually caused by an overactive immune system, the new treatment – a steroid commonly used in treating asthma and allergies – can curb the immune response and protect the developing fetus in the crucial early weeks of pregnancy, thereby cutting the risk of miscarriage.
- While is not needed in this sentence. In this case while can confuse the reader rather than making understanding this sentence easier for him. To connect the two parts of this sentence, use ‘and’ between them.
- Correct sentence – A third of the miscarriages are usually caused by an overactive immune system, and the new treatment – a steroid commonly used in treating asthma and allergies – can curb the immune response and protect the developing fetus in the crucial early weeks of pregnancy, thereby cutting the risk of miscarriage.
While and however don’t normally come in the same sentence. Take this sentence from one of our articles for instance:
– While the representative samples did show that child safety seats had helped reduce the chances of minor bumps and bruises among children by 25 percent as compared to lap-and-shoulder safety belts, however, both types of restraints scored equally in preventing serious injury, researchers found.
- While, in the beginning of the sentence, has rendered however superfluous. So don’t use however here.
– Ditto for this one with though and however interplay.
- Though smoking, particularly cigarettes, is by far the key contributor to lung cancer with estimated 87 percent lung cancer deaths each year in the United States, however, non-smokers can still develop the disease.
- Either cut though out or however. One will do just fine.
Always expand acronyms. Consider this sentence from one of the themedguru.com articles – “The risk on increased BMI at a young age, caused by prenatal exposure to OCs like HCB, … in life,” the study concluded.
– The writer should have expanded acronyms BMI & OC.
There are peculiar ways of using certain words; taking liberties with English language, far as these ways are concerned, will be inappropriate.
– Consider the word galore. It always comes after the associated word. For instance, “On my birthday, I got gifts galore. Never galore gifts.
Check redundancy, wordy phrases, needless repetitions, clichés, pretentious language, homonym problems, spelling and punctuation mistakes, vague words and terms, illogical statements and arguments, incorrect possessives, trite expressions, and other common problems.
Cut fat in your write-ups: Your readers will always appreciate more information in fewer words. So whenever you can cut some words, cut. Notice how the paragraph below has been cut to size:
Draft: If you are among those, who believe that smoking just one cigarette would not hurt your health in any way, and then it’s high time you change your perception. Because as per the researchers of a new study, 15-30 minutes is all it takes before that one cigarette you had puffed starts causing genetic damage in your body, leaving you one step closer to cancer. (65 words)
Edited: Smoking just one cigarette would not hurt your health, you believe? It’s time you changed your belief. According to a new study, 15-30 minutes of smoking is all it takes to cause genetic damage in your body, leaving you one step closer to cancer. (44 words)
Harpreet Bhagrath
by Harpreet Bhagrath | Nov 13, 2011 | Harpreet Bhagrath's Blog, Tutorials for Our Writers
If content writers stick around in the media for long, chances are that they’ll be required to gather information first-hand by interviewing sources. Here are a few pointers for the uninitiated.
Though there’s plenty to be said on the art of interviewing–in fact, books have been written on the subject–here’re a few notes to start the uninitiated. Plenty more will follow if only the team starts interviewing sources first-hand.
Go prepared. Do research on the subject (the interviewee) as well as the subject matter before the big day.
– The amount of research on the subject depends on why you are interviewing that person. Is it for an interview feature/profile feature or in-depth discussion, or the interviewee is one of the sources for a feature?
When you first meet the subject, introduce yourself, hand over your card, and do a bit of chit-chat. Tell him what you do at our publication. Explain a bit about the piece you are working on and where does the interviewee fit in the subject.
Take along a pen, a writing pad, and a recorder. In the notebook, write down the important points and note down the atmosphere and observation of the surroundings (for profile features, etc.). Also jot down the timing on your recorder when key issues/subjects were discussed.
Get their business card or note down their contact details. Never forget this. Card provides us with an interviewee’s name and designation correctly, besides of course, having his contact number. In case you have to clarify something later on, you’ll be kicking yourself for not asking for his business card.
Discuss things as if in an informal conversation. The idea is to make him feel comfortable.
– Ask open-ended questions to get the subject (the interviewee) to open up.
– No questions that just require a yes or no out of the interviewee.
Listen carefully and try to give interviewee the impression that you are completely into the conversation. Don’t interrupt him abruptly as this might put him off and the discussion will not be fruitful. But you can politely steer the conversation in the right (focused) direction in case the interviewee goes off on a tangent.
Ask the interviewee for a possible second sitting or at least further discussion through telephone.
Try to enjoy the conversation. The difference between a good interview and bad interview is whether you enjoyed having that conversation or not. This also holds true for public speaking.
Keep a camera with you. We need a good photo of the subject to go along with the piece.
Any questions? Just get in touch with me.
Harpreet Bhagrath
by Harpreet Bhagrath | Oct 17, 2011 | Tutorials for Our Writers, Writing Tutorials
After you have written your article or feature, ask yourself these questions.
Have you organised the arguments and ideas in a logical sequence?
- New information after old information and not the other way round
Does the reading become awkward for the reader?
- Transition of ideas within sentences and paragraphs has to be smooth
Is the content informative and interesting (or as interesting as it can be) throughout?
- Find the weak parts and work on them
Have you matched the writing style, tone, and purpose of the write-up?
Have you maintained the consistency of language and tone throughout the document? Has the TS style sheet been adhered to?
Have you checked pretentious language, homonym problems, spelling and punctuation mistakes, vague words and terms, illogical statements and arguments, incorrect possessives, clichés and trite expressions, and other such problems in the write-up?
Have you checked redundancy, wordy phrases, and needless repetitions? Does the write-up contain wordiness?
- Say more with less words, in a way that every word tells
Have you checked your word usage?
- Try to eliminate clichés, and use fresh words and phrases instead
- Try to better your words; see if you can replace weak or unfitting words with the ones that fit better
Any questions on these, just get in touch with the core team — shoot us a mail, message us on Yahoo Messenger, or just give us a tinkle.
Happy writing,
Cosmos Writers Editorial Team
by Harpreet Bhagrath | Oct 13, 2011 | Tutorials for Our Writers, Writing Tutorials
Here’s a bit on borrowing material from other sources.
Within the article, where you are talking about an idea — and the idea is not your own — you need to tell the readers honestly which source (website, book, magazine, paper, journal, etc.) the idea was borrowed from. You can write something like the following:
The Times noted in an article, article title here, that… (the idea continues here).
By doing the above, we are telling the readers that this idea does not belong to us. We did our research on the topic and borrowed the idea from The Times.
In case of quotes, if you did not take the quote first hand and borrowed it from a news site or magazine, you need to write a variation of the following:
“The quote here,” The Times quoted Mark Zuckerberg, CEO, Facebook, as saying.
So attribute all the borrowed ideas and information bits you put in the article to their sources (as exemplified above) at least three times throughout the article.
Because we expect the best from a writer of your caliber, you need to meet the following requirements towards researching and attributing the information:
ü Research on at least four good sources, and provide attribution to the sources of your information at least three times throughout the article.
ü Provide quotes from at least three speakers quoted in as many source sites.
- Link out to the source site, using the following HTML code: <a href=”URL of the source site”>The Times (website’s official name, not the home page URL)</a>.
- The attribution will typically read like the following: “The quote here,” The Times quoted Mark Zuckerberg, CEO, Facebook, as saying.
- With HTML coding, it reads like this: “The quote here,” <a href=”URL of the source site”>The Times (website’s official name, not the home page URL)</a> quoted Mark Zuckerberg, CEO, Facebook, as saying.
Any questions on the above? Just get in touch with the core team — shoot us a mail, message us on Yahoo Messenger, or just give us a tinkle.
Happy writing,
Cosmos Writers Editorial Team
by Harpreet Bhagrath | Oct 12, 2011 | Tutorials for Our Writers
Our freelance writers need to provide appropriate photos with their article. This post tries to clarify their doubts on the same.
Size of the Photos
Ideal size for image is 250x250px (Need not be square, but landscape format goes well with our layout).
You may use ‘public domain’ images or images selected from free as well as paid photo sites like Flickr, iStock Photo, etc. To cut the photo to right size, use a photo editing software, like the one at http://www.irfanview.com. Options to add canvas (border) and resize the image are available in the edit menu in Irfanview.
Copyright-Free Photos
Make sure you do not use any copyrighted images. Check for watermark and copyright inscriptions (at the bottom of the photo, in small letters); these two are the marks of a copyrighted photo.
Plus, far as possible, use photos available from free or paid images sites mentioned above. You will have to buy their membership, if it’s a paid site. Alternatively, look for ‘public domain’ images on the web.
Choice and Modifications of the Photos
The choice and the modification of photos are also important. The photos have to be of maximum 250 pixels in width and as square as possible. You can choose a rectangular photo (maximum dimension being 250 pixels again), but make sure that it is landscape (horizontally rectangular) and not portrait (vertically rectangular).
Grainy, unclear, or irrelevant photos will not be accepted. If you have the expertise, you can also modify the photos. What we mean by modification is performing graphics work on the photos, like joining two photos, using graphics, superimposing words, etc.
Title of the Photos
Also, we need to name the photos (don’t confuse ‘name or title’ of the photo with ‘caption’, which is something else) we choose for our news and features appropriately. If you cannot think of a name, then choose the headline/heading of the news or feature itself as the title of the photo. The photos’ labels are apparent to the readers, and it will be a mistake to think that the readers are not able to see what we have named the picture. Pointing the mouse on the photo provides them the name. So kindly be careful.
Photo Captions
You need to provide captions too with the photos. There is a slot within the “Create Content” on TJ (TJ is the contraction for The Journeyer) page where you can write/paste caption text. Try to describe what’s happening in the photo. Or link the photo with some interesting fact within the article. With people in the photo, you need to identify the chief characters within the photo. Provide, in parentheses, how the names are identified in the photo, like this: (from left).
Any questions on the above? Just get in touch with the core team — shoot us a mail, message us on Yahoo Messenger, or just give us a tinkle.
Happy writing,
Cosmos Writers Editorial Team